File 0038-Update-help-files.patch of Package procps

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From 8e7ef322e21b2232d2a1ff9482ec8ce2808fc5c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Craig Small <csmall@enc.com.au>
Date: Sun, 2 Feb 2014 18:13:01 +1100
Subject: [PATCH] Update help files

Benno Schulenberg suggested some changes to the help messages
to provide some consistency and clarity for both the users and
translators of procps.

The test needed to be updated as the pmap output changed too.

diff --git pgrep.c pgrep.c
index fda7924..d8d3dcb 100644
--- pgrep.c
+++ pgrep.c
@@ -115,19 +115,19 @@ static int __attribute__ ((__noreturn__)) usage(int opt)
 	}
 	fputs(_(" -c, --count               count of matching processes\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -f, --full                use full process name to match\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -g, --pgroup <id,...>     match listed process group IDs\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -G, --group <gid,...>     match real group IDs\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -g, --pgroup <PGID,...>   match listed process group IDs\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -G, --group <GID,...>     match real group IDs\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -n, --newest              select most recently started\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -o, --oldest              select least recently started\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -P, --parent <ppid,...>   match only child processes of the given parent\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -s, --session <sid,...>   match session IDs\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -P, --parent <PPID,...>   match only child processes of the given parent\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -s, --session <SID,...>   match session IDs\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -t, --terminal <tty,...>  match by controlling terminal\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -u, --euid <id,...>       match by effective IDs\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -U, --uid <id,...>        match by real IDs\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -u, --euid <ID,...>       match by effective IDs\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -U, --uid <ID,...>        match by real IDs\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -x, --exact               match exactly with the command name\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -F, --pidfile <file>      read PIDs from file\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -L, --logpidfile          fail if PID file is not locked\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" --ns <pid>                match the processes that belong to the same\n"
+	fputs(_(" --ns <PID>                match the processes that belong to the same\n"
 		"                           namespace as <pid>\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" --nslist <ns,...>         list which namespaces will be considered for\n"
 		"                           the --ns option.\n"
diff --git pidof.c pidof.c
index 6a38675..d1a9f31 100644
--- pidof.c
+++ pidof.c
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ static int __attribute__ ((__noreturn__)) usage(int opt)
 	fputs(USAGE_OPTIONS, fp);
 	fputs(_(" -s, --single-shot         return one PID only\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -c, --check-root          omit processes with different root\n"), fp);
-	fputs(_(" -x                        scripts too\n"), fp);
+	fputs(_(" -x                        also find shells running the named scripts\n"), fp);
 	fputs(_(" -o, --omit-pid <PID,...>  omit processes with PID\n"), fp);
 	fputs(USAGE_SEPARATOR, fp);
 	fputs(USAGE_HELP, fp);
diff --git pmap.c pmap.c
index 4ecabce..66c1c2d 100644
--- pmap.c
+++ pmap.c
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ usage(FILE * out)
 {
 	fputs(USAGE_HEADER, out);
 	fprintf(out,
-		_(" %s [options] pid [pid ...]\n"), program_invocation_short_name);
+		_(" %s [options] PID [PID ...]\n"), program_invocation_short_name);
 	fputs(USAGE_OPTIONS, out);
 	fputs(_(" -x, --extended              show details\n"), out);
 	fputs(_(" -X                          show even more details\n"), out);
diff --git ps/help.c ps/help.c
index 9133903..1b98b73 100644
--- ps/help.c
+++ ps/help.c
@@ -109,18 +109,18 @@ void do_help (const char *opt, int rc) {
   if (section == HELP_LST || section == HELP_ALL) {
     fputs(_("\nSelection by list:\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -C <command>         command name\n"), out);
-    fputs(_(" -G, --Group <gid>    real group id or name\n"), out);
+    fputs(_(" -G, --Group <GID>    real group id or name\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -g, --group <group>  session or effective group name\n"), out);
-    fputs(_(" -p, --pid <pid>      process id\n"), out);
-    fputs(_("     --ppid <pid>     select by parent process id\n"), out);
+    fputs(_(" -p, --pid <PID>      process id\n"), out);
+    fputs(_("     --ppid <PID>     select by parent process id\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -s, --sid <session>  session id\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -t, t, --tty <tty>   terminal\n"), out);
-    fputs(_(" -u, U, --user <uid>  effective user id or name\n"), out);
-    fputs(_(" -U, --User <uid>     real user id or name\n"), out);
+    fputs(_(" -u, U, --user <UID>  effective user id or name\n"), out);
+    fputs(_(" -U, --User <UID>     real user id or name\n"), out);
     fputs(_("\n"
-      "  selection <arguments> take either:\n"
-      "    comma-separated list e.g. '-u root,nobody' or\n"
-      "    blank-separated list e.g. '-p 123 4567'\n"), out);
+      "  The selection options take as their argument either:\n"
+      "    a comma-separated list e.g. '-u root,nobody' or\n"
+      "    or a blank-separated list e.g. '-p 123 4567'\n"), out);
   }
   if (section == HELP_OUT || section == HELP_ALL) {
     fputs(_("\nOutput formats:\n"), out);
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ void do_help (const char *opt, int rc) {
     fputs(_(" -O <format>          preloaded with default columns\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  O <format>          as -O, with BSD personality\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -o, o, --format <format>\n"
-      "                      user defined format\n"), out);
+            "                      user-defined format\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  s                   signal format\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  u                   user-oriented format\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  v                   virtual memory format\n"), out);
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ void do_help (const char *opt, int rc) {
   }
   if (section == HELP_THD || section == HELP_ALL) {
     fputs(_("\nShow threads:\n"), out);
-    fputs(_("  H                   as if they where processes\n"), out);
+    fputs(_("  H                   as if they were processes\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -L                   possibly with LWP and NLWP columns\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -m, m                after processes\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -T                   possibly with SPID column\n"), out);
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ void do_help (const char *opt, int rc) {
     fputs(_("  c                   show true command name\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  e                   show the environment after command\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  k,    --sort        specify sort order as: [+|-]key[,[+|-]key[,...]]\n"), out);
-    fputs(_("  L                   list format specifiers\n"), out);
+    fputs(_("  L                   show format specifiers\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  n                   display numeric uid and wchan\n"), out);
     fputs(_("  S,    --cumulative  include some dead child process data\n"), out);
     fputs(_(" -y                   do not show flags, show rss (only with -l)\n"), out);
diff --git skill.c skill.c
index 60ed274..9f3b4fc 100644
--- skill.c
+++ skill.c
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ static void __attribute__ ((__noreturn__)) skillsnice_usage(FILE * out)
 	fputs(_(" -i, --interactive  interactive\n"), out);
 	fputs(_(" -l, --list         list all signal names\n"), out);
 	fputs(_(" -L, --table        list all signal names in a nice table\n"), out);
-	fputs(_(" -n, --no-action    no action\n"), out);
+	fputs(_(" -n, --no-action    do not actually kill processes; just print what would happen\n"), out);
 	fputs(_(" -v, --verbose      explain what is being done\n"), out);
 	fputs(_(" -w, --warnings     enable warnings (not implemented)\n"), out);
 	fputs(USAGE_SEPARATOR, out);
@@ -371,8 +371,8 @@ static void __attribute__ ((__noreturn__)) skillsnice_usage(FILE * out)
 	fputs(_(" --ns <pid>               match the processes that belong to the same\n"
 		"                          namespace as <pid>\n"), out);
 	fputs(_(" --nslist <ns,...>        list which namespaces will be considered for\n"
-		"                          the --ns option.\n"
-		"                          Available namespaces: ipc, mnt, net, pid, user, uts\n"), out);
+		"                          the --ns option; available namespaces are\n:"
+	        "                          ipc, mnt, net, pid, user, uts\n"), out);
 
 	fputs(USAGE_SEPARATOR, out);
 	fputs(USAGE_SEPARATOR, out);
diff --git testsuite/pmap.test/pmap.exp testsuite/pmap.test/pmap.exp
index bc2550a..5a9e603 100644
--- testsuite/pmap.test/pmap.exp
+++ testsuite/pmap.test/pmap.exp
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ set pmap_ext_footer "\[ -\]+\\s+total kB\\s+\\d+(\\s+\[\\d-\]+){2,3}\\s*\$"
 set test "pmap with no arguments"
 spawn $pmap
 #expect_pass "$test" "^$lt-$\?pmap: argument missing"
-expect_pass "$test" "Usage:\\s+$lt-$?pmap \\\[options\\\] pid \\\[pid \.\.\.\\\]"
+expect_pass "$test" "Usage:\\s+$lt-$?pmap \\\[options\\\] PID \\\[PID \.\.\.\\\]"
 
 set test "pmap standard output"
 spawn $pmap $mypid
-- 
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