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From 6305684daf25fddca8a8922f3359a1881983b12f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lukas Larsson <lukas@erlang.org>
Date: Wed, 19 May 2021 08:14:33 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 6/6] Apply suggestions from code review
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Co-authored-by: Björn Gustavsson <bgustavsson@gmail.com>
---
 erts/doc/src/erlang.xml | 4 ++--
 lib/stdlib/doc/src/io.xml | 5 ++---
 system/doc/reference_manual/processes.xml | 4 ++--
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/erts/doc/src/erlang.xml b/erts/doc/src/erlang.xml
index 08499ccd22..df592d809a 100644
--- a/erts/doc/src/erlang.xml
+++ b/erts/doc/src/erlang.xml
@@ -4367,7 +4367,7 @@ receive_replies(ReqId, N, Acc) ->
 are delivered to the process. If there is no connection to
 <c><anno>Node</anno></c>, an attempt is made to create one.
 If this fails, a <c>nodedown</c> message is delivered.
- The delivery of the <c>nodedown</c> signal is not ordered towards other
+ The delivery of the <c>nodedown</c> signal is not ordered with respect to other
 link or monitor signals from the node that goes down. If you need a
 guarantee that all signals from the remote node has been delivered before
 the <c>nodedown</c> signal is sent, you should use
@@ -6108,7 +6108,7 @@ receive_replies(ReqId, N, Acc) ->
 <c><anno>Item</anno></c>s were included
 in <c><anno>ItemList</anno></c>. Valid <c><anno>Item</anno></c>s can
 be included multiple times in <c><anno>ItemList</anno></c>.
- Getting process informations follows the signal ordering guarentees
+ Getting process informations follows the signal ordering guarantees
 described in the
 <seeguide marker="system/reference_manual:processes#signals">
 Processes Chapter</seeguide> in the Erlang Reference Manual.
diff --git a/lib/stdlib/doc/src/io.xml b/lib/stdlib/doc/src/io.xml
index 99871c280b..9bea52c36e 100644
--- a/lib/stdlib/doc/src/io.xml
+++ b/lib/stdlib/doc/src/io.xml
@@ -1234,9 +1234,9 @@ enter><input>bar.</input>
 
 <c>standard_io</c> is an alias for <seemfa marker="erts:erlang#group_leader/0"><c>
 group_leader/0</c></seemfa>, so in order to change where the default input/output
- requests are sent you can change the group leader using
+ requests are sent you can change the group leader for the current process using
 <seemfa marker="erts:erlang#group_leader/2"><c>
- group_leader(self(), NewGroupLeader).</c></seemfa>
+ group_leader(NewGroupLeader, self()).</c></seemfa>
 
 There is always a process registered under the name of
 <c>user</c>. This can be used for sending output to the user.
@@ -1272,4 +1272,3 @@ Error: error 11</pre>
 Module:format_error(ErrorDescriptor)</code>
 </section>
 </erlref>
-
diff --git a/system/doc/reference_manual/processes.xml b/system/doc/reference_manual/processes.xml
index 74ff2ba6e0..0ff4f0e01d 100644
--- a/system/doc/reference_manual/processes.xml
+++ b/system/doc/reference_manual/processes.xml
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ spawn(Module, Name, Args) -> pid()
 	 or
 <seemfa marker="erts:erlang#whereis/1"><c>whereis/1</c></seemfa>
 	 BIFs. The request signal is sent to the
-	 <seeguide marker="#runtime-service">name service</seeguide> which
+	 <seeguide marker="#runtime-service">name service</seeguide>, which
 	 responds with the reply signal.
 	</item>
 
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ spawn(Module, Name, Args) -> pid()
 
 <marker id="runtime-service"/>
 The clock service, the name service, the timer service, and the spawn
- service mentioned above are services provided by the runtime system.
+ service mentioned previously are services provided by the runtime system.
 Each of these services consists of multiple independently executing
 entities. Such a service can be viewed as a group of processes, and
 could actually be implemented like that. Since each service consists of
-- 
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